Gangster Teddy
Greg lived an normal life and had a normal car and a normal apartment. One day that all changed. One day when Greg was driving to his normal job he saw a signing 'Buy lotto ticks and win a Billion dollars.' So the next day he made a pit stop to lotto. 3 days later he was a billionare. He was spending his money rapidly. He was at the warehouse and the snake gang come up to him and smashed he and stole everything. To this day he is hunting that gang and this is what he looks like now.
Who's the snake gang?! Sounds horrifically normal. Like the way you used 'rapidly'. Remember to proofread carefully. I wonder if we can copy and paste the prompt on here too?
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Hey Blake, i like your story about your “Gangsta Teddy”. I enjoyed the ending of your story. I like how descriptive you were in your story, maybe next time you could add something that will make the reader more attached to your story. What made you write the “Gangsta Teddy” story?
ReplyDeleteHello Blake, I really like your story about the ‘Gangster teddy’, I liked the layout of the story and the part where he randomly becomes a billionaire, I thought that was a good way to end it. Maybe next time you could add more twists to make the story more interesting. What inspired you to write a story about a gangster teddy?
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